Tuesday 27 May 2014

Making a Plan Before writing a story

I am learning to make a plan before writing a story. My plan matches my story. It was good to use a pan to help me. I'll certainly use a plan again.

 Last Friday night, I had to tidy my bedroom, because my brother messed it up!
 I felt tired when I finally tidyed my bedroom. But when I woke up it was very messy because my brother , he woke up early and messed it up again  when I was at home. 
Marco
when I wake up from Friday night
Van Gogh's Bedroom in Arles
tired
I have to clean up my bedroom because  it was messy and toys all over the place. So I have to tidy up my bedroom.

Thursday 15 May 2014

Making Connections


I have made a popplet to show that I can make a connection with a character. It was very easy to make my connections. I have compared myself with the story. Next time I could compare different stories.